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a guest from the UK.
Two of the three can also be used for business…
Looks pretty good, but here’s a few changes you might want to make…
YOU CAN PUT “THE” INFRONT OF “UK”:
We welcome you as a guest from the UK.
“TOP 3″ SEEMS A LITTLE WEIRD TO ME, TRY MAYBE:
Here we offer 3 top, full-featured personal web hosting packages. All but the third, can also be used for Business hosting.
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Here we offer 3 great, full-featured personal web hosting packages. All but the third, can also be used for Business hosting.
COMMA BETWEEN “YOU” AND “WE”:
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Very well-written overall. I have corrected a few minor grammatical details. The only significant change I made is at the end of the last paragraph. Some of the changes I made are as follows: I changed “3″ to “three” (numbers from 1-9 are usually written out). I removed the words “video and music” because they are redundant: the average user knows that multimedia includes video and music. You can see that I have made the invitation more detailed so that it sounds more professional and inviting.
We welcome you as a guest from the UK.
We offer three top, full-featured personal web hosting packages. All but the third can also be used for business hosting. (A personal website includes any non-commercial site, such as personal pages, forums, weblogs/wordpress, multimedia sites, etc.) All our recommended services are FrontPage/DreamWeaver compatible.
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An ad coupon gives you the opportunity to advertise on well-known search engines. You can advertise your website for free and get more traffic to your site.
All of our recommended web hosting services, except for the third service option, have established partnership with the Google and Yahoo search engines to provide you with this special opportunity.
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